Monday 22 June 2015

Wood mill adventure

For part of Year 6's SAT's  we  had to use the experiences from our Wood mill camping trip in a adventure story we had to write we had to include the activities of:Tunneling, Rock climbing,Raft building or Archery. For some of us it was a real challenge to include everything to get our levels for when we move up to secondary school.First we used a story mountain to plan it but then we wrote it on google docs and if we did that we could change it round and have the beginning somewhere else.If our story is successful then we will achieve good levels for our SAT's.We all hope all of our levels are good for all of our tests that we have successfully completed.

My story was about a family and two girls called Jennifer and Lucy.  In the middle of the night they heard howling and scratching on the side of their tent and found an owl; so they followed it and got on a neglected canoe. But they capsized!  They got split up and Lucy couldn't swim.  Jennifer tried looking for her but she couldn't find her.  She ran back to the camp and called the mum and dad and they found her clinging onto a branch so they helped her out.

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